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Warm skin
Meets
Hearts begin
To beat
The air is
Too sweet
When our
Lips finally touch
Let's savor
This
Don't move
Too fast
I wish
This would last
Before life
Speeds up again
Before night
Reaches it's end
Hold me
Close
Don't let go
I hope you
Know
My heart
Will always
Scream your name
In each
Daydream
When you
Whisper
"I love you"
Once more
©2007-2009 =2SadEyes
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:iconmattiello:
I like how you emphasize your word or line pretty much every other line. It makes one want to pause, therefore insinuating that that line is important. great idea!

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:icon2sadeyes:
Thank you! That was sort of my goal with this one so I'm happy to have accomplished it!
:iconmattiello:
you're quite welcome! you most certainly did!

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